Friday, March 6, 2009

03/6/09 Articles


Article Title1/Who it's written by:Mixed emotions for new tardy policy,staff rejoice while their students grieve.
Mariah Porter news editor
What did you like about it?That finally somebody wrote about the tardy policy.
And that they asked students there opinions about it and i liked that some people tought it was unfair about it and that they should take the tardy policy away.And that they should only give out the yellow passes.I also like how she put a picture of how the room is full with all late students.
What did you dislike about it?
I liked it all there was nothing about it that i didnt like.
I think that she did good on this article.
What improvements would you make?

There are no improvements i would make in this cause its really good.

Article Title1/Who it's written by:Alumni voted one of the eight cutest couples in Austin
Rachel Wilson staff reporter

What did you like about it?
i liked how she wrote about something else that aint going around school but in Austin.It shows that they want us to know whats going around and i tought the article was really cute because i liked what it said about the couple.
What did you dislike about it?I didnt like dislike anything it was good and it had a whole lot of details.
What improvements would you make?
I say she should of put this article on the second page cause i tought it was really good.It deserves to be in the beggining and not last.

Article Title3/Who it's written by:Athletes of the issue,Maya Gonzalez
What did you like about it?
I liked how it talked about soccer cause i like soccer and i liked how she took a good picture of Adilene macedo playing soccer.And i liked how she said nice things about her and she made the soccer varsity look really good by writting about one of there soccer players.
What did you dislike about it?There was nothing wrong with it was really good.
What improvements would you make?I would probably make it a little bit longer and probably put it on top and not the bottom.

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